Ana Lia Alonso
Teacher: Stella Saubidet
ISFD N° 41
19 September, 2013
Mistakes in my Essays
A Question of Anxiety
Inmigratin in Argentina- Images (online). From:
http://www.bing.com/images/search?q=inmigration in ArgentineFORM=HDRSC2#
If my computer worked well, I wilould put the comentaries in the right way. Till then, I am going to put it here..
Comentary from Xoana to my paragraph
Roses need some care to grow properly as well as to become marvelous flowers with sweet smell, and as a rose grower it is essential for you to be familiar with the ways of caring for them. To start with, in rose growing as in growing everything else, one has to begin at the soil, for it is the soil that nourishes the roots, the roots that feed the leaves, the leaves that support the blossoms. So, check your garden and determine the ideal spot to plant it with the require amount of light every day. Then, when it comes to watering them, always make sure you do not get water on the leaves, since wet leaves can lead to fungal infections. Next, feed these sweet smelling flowers properly with the correct food, because they need food to grow strong and beautiful. What is more, take your flowering plants safe from bugs, by either using rose food that has insecticide in them. Finally, if your plants have their leaves black, them it is time to change them to another place of your garden. In conclusion, knowing how to take care of roses, you can obtain beautiful and healthy flowers.